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32 comments on Joker: The Dark Knight (I've improved Joker 2)

  • mikeypascual Is it still a musical?
  • adityanimmalapudi not exacty
  • adityanimmalapudi Since Joker: Foiles a Deux hasn't done very well only because of the 3rd act, I'd decided to change it with the Save the Cat structure of Act 3:
  • adityanimmalapudi Break into Three (Act 3 Starts): Arthur (Joker) fully embraces his identity as the Joker, leading a chaotic movement in Gotham. He discovers Harleen Quinzel’s (Harley Quinn) growing attachment to him.
  • adityanimmalapudi Finale: The deleted clips show Arthur’s deeper connection with Harleen. We see glimpses of her torn between her professional duties and her fascination with Arthur. She gets caught in his unleashed chaos, leading to her breaking point.
  • adityanimmalapudi High Tower Surprise: Arthur gets confronted by Gotham’s elite (Brendan Gleeson) as he’s beaten up at the prison, after making fun of Gary & killing the court judge after announcing his death penalty. The guards grabbed Arthur to an electric chair. Just before the electrocution started, then BOOM! There is an explosion in the room, and then Lee Quinzel arrives, attempting to save Arthur and bring him back from the brink. & the mob started murdering the guards.
  • adityanimmalapudi Gathering the Team: Harleen confronts Arthur in his chaos, revealing her past traumas in the deleted clips. She tries to reach his humanity, suggesting a twisted partnership to survive. They form a tumultuous alliance.
  • adityanimmalapudi Executing the Plan: Now aligned, Arthur and Harleen take over the gala, broadcasting their message to Gotham. In a climactic confrontation, the authorities arrive, creating a tense standoff. Harleen's transformation into Harley Quinn is complete, symbolized by her actions to protect Arthur.
  • adityanimmalapudi High Tower Surprise: Amid the chaos, Arthur realizes the consequences of his actions—Gotham descending into utter anarchy. He questions his purpose, as he realises that the mob is only using him, but before thinking he provides himself a moment of self-reflection seen in the deleted clips.
  • adityanimmalapudi Dig Deep Down: Arthur continues the destruction or finds a semblance of redemption. Harleen’s devotion sways him, giving a glimmer of hope for a more calculated and sinister partnership. Final Image: The last shot shows Arthur and Harley, now united, watching Gotham burn from a rooftop, symbolizing their newfound reign. This final image ties back to the opening scenes of Arthur’s struggles, completing his transformation. This revised third act adds depth to Arthur and Harleen's relationship, leveraging the deleted clips to enhance their emotional and psychological journey. With the prison cell being renamed “The Joker & Harlee’s Lair”

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