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  • castingsinmyblood Beautiful. Any ideas for a director? May I suggest Ang Lee (don't ask why, but it means you'll get an editor and possibly a cinematographer and composer for free)

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  • ringothedrummer Hunter's Story: Hunter is an interesting person, with an interesting choice of clothing, with an interesting hairstyle, and with an interesting pair of shoes. Hunter is the lead singer of a club band that doesn't get payed that much. Hunter tries to avoid messages from his father, and just wants to be free as a bird. One day, at a shopping mall, Hunter saw a man wearing a ski mask being arrested. This was something Hunter had always seen but what really caught his attention was that there was an envelope filled with cash. Without any hesitation, Hunter grabbed the envelope, and ran off. But as he was running home, a woman snatched his bag of groceries, but he didn't care. That night, Hunter used his money to get expensive drinks, and better instruments. That night with the band, everything went great, and they celebrated. Hunter then got a message from a girl, asking to go on a date with her. He agrees, and drives to his date's residence, drunk. When he arrived, he and his date drove their way to a bar, but didn't make, due to them hitting a nearby car, resulting in them driving into a street light, resulting in them dying instantly

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  • ringothedrummer Amanda's Story: Amanda is a unique individual. Amanda usually wears long coats, and has frizzy hair. Behind her kind face, Amanda has a dark secret. Amanda....is a thief, she'll steal anything. It was a Tuesday when she began another round of her thievery, but as she exited a store, she saw a man, wearing a ski mask, walking with a bag filled with money. What was unexpected was that Amanda, a criminal herself, called the police. Was she a changed person? Nope, because later that day, she robbed another person, stealing their groceries. That night, Amanda, didn't want to be alone for the night,. She then remembered a singer that she would always see at a club. She managed to find the singer's account, and DMed him, asking to go on a date. When he arrived, Amanda soon noticed that the man was intoxicated, but she didn't care, she was gonna steal from him eventually. But as the two of them drove to a club, they drove into a car. Thankfully, Amanda jumped out of the car, before hitting a street light, but she died when landing her head on the side of a sidewalk

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  • ringothedrummer Walter's Story: Walter is a former criminal, who barely leaves his apartment, due to the police. To make things worse, Walter's wife barely speaks to him. One day, as he was watching his TV, he was given a letter, revealing that he and his wife are in debt. Walter wondered the room, wondering what must he do. Walter decided to do what he did best, he decided to rob a bank in a mall. As he walked to the exit, with the cash he had, he felt hands grab him and push him to the ground. Walter had been caught once more. Walter spent the night in a Jail cell, only to be informed about some terrible news

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  • ringothedrummer Let's recap: If Jodie hadn't been in debt, Walter wouldn't have robbed the bank. If Walter hadn't robbed the bank, Frank would've never given him the money. If Frank had never given Walter the money, Amanda wouldn't have called the police. If Amanda didn't call the police, Walter wouldn't have been arrested, and dropped the cash. If Walter didn't drop the cash, Hunter wouldn't have celebrated and got drunk. If Hunter hadn't got drunk, him and Amanda wouldn't have gone on the date, Jodie wouldn't have been killed. If Jodie wouldn't have been killed, the accident would've never happened. What I'm trying to say is that we're all connected. What one person does, it effects the other......like Dominos. One of us falls, and the other follows. And this keeps going, and going, and going.....until we've all fallen....

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  • ringothedrummer Jodie's Story: Jodie is a quiet woman. She lives in an apartment, with her husband. What her husband doesn't know about her is that she does online gambling. One day, when she was sitting in her room, she heard her husband leave, only to find a letter, revealing that they were in debt. Fearing that something may go wrong, Jodie decided to leave, she needed to find a place to stay. That night, when sleeping in her car, she heard the sound of another car, resulting in getting hit, dying instantly

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  • ringothedrummer Frank's Story: Frank is a kind old man, who works as a bank teller. But, Frank isn't happy, in fact, he's depressed. Frank has been trying to contact his son, but hasn't gotten anything. To make things worse, his wife had died a year ago. One day, while working at a bank, a man with a gun demanded for money. Frank did what the man said, giving him the cash. Later that day, he was informed the criminal was caught. That night, Frank was given a call from the police, telling him that his son was killed in a car crash

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  • ringothedrummer Inspired by the video by Rudy Mancuso

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  • accaffrey brilliant

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